So I forgot the description in the first post, my bad. Anyways, the author I'm attempting to imitate is Sharron Creech. One of my favorite things about her writing are her unique metaphors. One I remember really well is at the beginning of a book she compared spaghetti someone was eating to worms and dirt, which is kind of disgusting, but I thought it was an interesting approach and was surprisingly more funny than nauseating. She also has a unique way of telling an entire story. She starts with heavy description and gives you some information, but keeps you guessing, and reading. Its almost mysterious. Anyways, thats what I was trying to do.